Tuesday, 3 December 2013


Journal 1: The Death of King Hamlet (Claudius).
It’s been two months since I killed King Hamlet and everything seems to be going good, no one knows what I did, although I am not going to let Hamlet leave to go and proceed his studies. I am suspicious that he might have his doubt about me killing his dad, this worries me greatly. Either way today is the day I announce my marriage to the beautiful Gertrude, that bastard Hamlet stole the love of my life, but now that he’s gone from the face of the earth she’s all for me. Although I need to keep a close eye on old King Hamlet’s son he might have his doubt on what I did, also he doesn’t seem to like me very much, I think he’s still sad about his dad’s death but what better to rub salt in the wound of that little spoiled boy to marry his mother.

1 comment:

  1. Babs, you capture Claudius' voice quite well. One area for improvement: you seem to join many of your sentences together with commas, creating comma splices. Be mindful of that. Also, next time let's try and include a picture. I like the venom you have used in your choices of diction. Keep that up!

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