Shakespeare wants us to learn,
through the delay of Hamlet, that prince Hamlet is a completely irrational
young man, who over analyzes many situations. He is considering all aspects of his
current situation, and he wants to be sure that killing Claudius is the right
thing to do. After the mousetrap, when Claudius runs out of the play, Hamlet
believes he has proof that Claudius did in fact kill Old king Hamlet. When
Horatio agrees with Hamlets view of the king’s reaction, the proof is
overwhelming. “Hamlet: Oh good Horatio, I’ll take the ghost’s word for a
thousand pound. Didst perceive? Horatio: Very well, my lord” (3.2.281). It is
clear that Claudius killed Hamlets father. I believe that the reluctance Hamlet
feels towards killing his uncle comes from an irrational internal struggle.
Although he wants revenge for his father’s death, Hamlet does not take
Claudius’ life because he doesn’t want Claudius to be admitted into heaven. When
Hamlet is given the opportunity to kill, his uncle is on his knees praying, and
begging for forgiveness. Hamlet states, “Now he is praying; And now I’ll do’t:
and so he goes to heaven: And so im revenged…and, for that, send [this villain]
To heaven” (3.3.74). I am under the impression that the way that Hamlet
hesitates is completely irrational. After he has complete proof that his
suspicions about the death of his father are true, there should be nothing
stopping Hamlet from avenging his father. Besides; as stated in this article, King Claudius did not only take
Hamlet’s father’s life, he also took Hamlet’s mother, and his right to the
throne. If Hamlet was a smarter man, he would have realized that he would
not be given forgiveness for the crimes he committed, and he would never be
admitted into heaven. It is for these
reasons that I believe Hamlet just needs to Kill Claudius already!
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Feedback for Rob: You have a run on sentence in your second sentence. Also, I'd start with a stronger topic sentence. You state that he feels reluctance in killing "his father"... technically, he is Hamlet's step father. You state that he does not want to turn into the "killer that Claudius is"... do you have any quotes or evidence to support this? If you look at the rubric, you'll see that specific evidence is needed for a level four. I don't see any quotes. Where does he get sufficient proof that Claudius did it? Be specific. Good topic sentence. Overall, I'd say adding specific evidence will increase the level of depth you are providing. If you look at some of your peers' work. you'll see examples of this.
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